rough cut feed back

1) Goodwin.

• The lyrics matched the visuals.
• Showing the artist a lot to help with advertising.

2) Editing.

•  Effective use of reverse shot.
• Good variety of cuts which gave the video pace.
• Does however need more transitions. 

3) Camera work.

•  Variety of shots at beginning- towards the end you might need more.
• Good use of zoom- possibly used too much and too close into the face.
• Camera use fairly steady- more shots to break it up- different angles?

4) Mise-en-scene.

•  Good use of costume change.
• Too dark at the beginning.
• Lots of costume changes- represents time scale.
• Good use of props.
• Good locations to emphasize themes of song. Can't really see it's raining though.

5) Performance.

• Use some stronger shots to enhance the performance as there are some really good shots but others which show the singer being self concious let down the performance. 
• Need to have more shots looking directly at camera instead of looking at some one that the audience can't see.